Looking for some critique.

[jvp]

So this past weekend I was in the studio with Elizabeth and would like to get some input on some of the pics. I used some of Nicks techniques and a few different light modifiers.

Thanks,

Jacob



1.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g203/kobe79/slickforce/Untitled-3.jpg
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2.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g203/kobe79/slickforce/Untitled-2.jpg
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3.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g203/kobe79/slickforce/Untitled-1A.jpg
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4.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g203/kobe79/slickforce/Untitled-4.jpg
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[Bigram]

I think the shots are cool. Editing in the 2 shot might be a little too retouched cause of the loss of skin texture. But the rest are cool in my book.

[Derek Eskridge]

Nice work! The retouching on the first 2 are a lil much. Try taking down the opacity on the clone stamp. Even add noise. See if that works out. Other then that you have some great work! Keep it up :)

Derek
Assistant to Nick Saglimbeni