1st INDOOR photoshoot .. CC appreciated

[Leonardo Oregel]

Please let me know what you guys think, I've been trying to work on my lighting.

#1
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8354.jpg

#2
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8391.jpg

#3
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8412.jpg

#4
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8427.jpg

#5
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8438.jpg

#6
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8456.jpg

#7
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8467.jpg

#8
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/leonardos36/IMG_8485.jpg

[silent-tortoise]

Hello Leonardo,

A very good first attempt.
The ones with the model in the pink dress show quite hard lighting and this is not very good for women.
I would move the light nearer to the subject ( not so sure if you were using a softbox for your shots) to get a softer look.
The larger the light source, the softer the light. The smaller the light source, the harder the light. The sun is really large, but because it is far away and small, it can cast hard shadows.
Lighting is about experimentation.
Think about keeping an 'S' curve on your model as you have done in some of your photographs.
This makes your model look more confident.
Very good first attempt.
I look forward to seeing more.