Feedback?

[Mr Doug]

I'm reluctant to post this only because the last time there was no feedback. My edits either suck, or everyone is
just as busy as I am. We do have lives, right? LOL Thank you in advance. I just need to know if I'm close to getting
these techniques.

[Bigram]

As far as editing goes, I would just clean up the bag under her right eye a little. But everything else looks like a go from here.